Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Like candle HEART melts....

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Heart beats
in a lovely rhythm
I do not know why,
how, with you, it meets.


I do not understand
how it becomes rock
while seeing you in pain
Like candle HEART melts.


I do not know you yet
suddenly, arise a feeling
to share some words with you
why.......???? HEART tells

Gita Pandit

8 comments:

  1. अच्छा लिखती हैं आप...बहुत ख़ूबसूरत...चौराहे पर आने के लिए आपका धन्यवाद भी. कुछ और कविताएं लिखी हैं...उन पर भी राय जानना चाहूंगा.

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  2. well said..
    perfect choice of words for perfect situation with perfect emotion..
    It served the purpose....I am impressed ! ! !

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  3. very true feeling of heart expressed in words

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  4. very true feeling of heart expressed in words

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  5. nice geeta yr poetic expression of love which comes suddenly which we dont know for whom n wen it will cover us ....gud

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  6. बहुत सुन्दर मगर

    कभी-कभीऐसा भी हो जाता है

    दिल
    लगता है
    लड़खड़ाने जब देखता है
    तुम्हारे
    स्कूटर के पीछे बैठे
    रकीब को

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  7. I do not know you yet
    suddenly, arise a feeling
    to share some words with you
    why.......???? HEART tells

    And the heart is right. beautiful expressions.

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