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Heart beats
in a lovely rhythm
I do not know why,
how, with you, it meets.
I do not understand
how it becomes rock
while seeing you in pain
Like candle HEART melts.
I do not know you yet
suddenly, arise a feeling
to share some words with you
why.......???? HEART tells
Gita Pandit
अच्छा लिखती हैं आप...बहुत ख़ूबसूरत...चौराहे पर आने के लिए आपका धन्यवाद भी. कुछ और कविताएं लिखी हैं...उन पर भी राय जानना चाहूंगा.
ReplyDeletewell said..
ReplyDeleteperfect choice of words for perfect situation with perfect emotion..
It served the purpose....I am impressed ! ! !
very true feeling of heart expressed in words
ReplyDeletevery true feeling of heart expressed in words
ReplyDeletenice.
ReplyDeletenice geeta yr poetic expression of love which comes suddenly which we dont know for whom n wen it will cover us ....gud
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुन्दर मगर
ReplyDeleteकभी-कभीऐसा भी हो जाता है
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I do not know you yet
ReplyDeletesuddenly, arise a feeling
to share some words with you
why.......???? HEART tells
And the heart is right. beautiful expressions.